Heavy Eyes
1.Her eyes hang heavywith repeats of sleeplessnessendless wantinguncontrolledunenchantedunmasked by sheer gravityby the weight of itthe wait.2.Tomorrow's close in on today.3.Her eyes hang heavy...
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Quote:don't miss a thingyou can't miss a thingyou might misseverything. This is utterly timeless, PA...Profound with a capital 'P', heavy to the point of engulfing my soul....magnificent!! Lost
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I can relate in a big way. AAt least I can remember when I lived life like that, these days . . . ah . . . not so much. The thing is, whatever I was afraid I was going to miss, I think I missed...
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I don't know what it is about this piece, but it gripped my attention all the way through...and I had to read it over again...love that ending; as sharp as a bear trap...snapping shut on the images...
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Hi, PA. Though the tone is entirely different, as this seems filled with such pain and frustration, your closing here reminded me so much of the old Aerosmith song "I don't want to miss a thing""I...
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I can so relate to this! I miss everything and am so darn depressed because of it, that damn illness. Excellent poem, enjoyed!
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Waiting while the depression closes in a bit more every day, afraid to miss a moment that might offer some ease, yet feeling too exhausted to go on. Wonderfully written.noel
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Thank you for the comment Noel and welcome to the Depths! I hope we'll be seeing some of your posts around here sometime soon?~PA"These poems do not live: It's a sad diagnosis...And they stupidly...
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I realy enjoyed this poem, paticularly the words of part 1. I also like how you divided it eight lines on top, eight lines on the bottom with a one line division in the middle. You seem to have...
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